"The Essay"
As a future teachers we are ask to assess this student's essay and to be honest it is quite difficult to be a teacher and how I wonder a teacher can mark all of the student's essays in just a few days, it takes effort to do that. Continue with the essay, we decided to give this student 10 out of 20. Although there are lot of grammar mistakes and spelling errors still we can understand what is the student are trying to say in his or her essay. There are some good vocabulary that are used in the essay and it shows that the student are really trying to do the best for his or her essay. All in all we decided to gave the student 10 out of 20 which is enough for the student to pass.
It will be great to tell the student the strength of this essay, ie good vocabulary:)
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